Strunk & White FTW

"Steve in Manhattan" (blogenfreude01) 02/11/2018 at 16:55 • Filed to: None

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Spent so much time correcting this error, comma splice errors, and other bad usage when editing a legal journal. Let’s hear it for the red, white, and blue.

!!! UNKNOWN CONTENT TYPE !!!

And yes, my missing subject error is noted.

winterlegacy, here 'till the end > Steve in Manhattan 02/11/2018 at 17:06

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And yet Oakhurst milk still tastes funky. There’s a bit of a metallic tang to it that I can’t place, but it’s not in any other milk brand.

Regardless, this is hilarious and ridiculous in all the wrong ways.

Steve in Manhattan > winterlegacy, here 'till the end 02/11/2018 at 17:11

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Common sense often never appears in a legal brief, believe me.

Ash78, voting early and often > Steve in Manhattan 02/11/2018 at 17:18

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It’s what makes a Subaru, a Subaru.

Urambo Tauro > Steve in Manhattan 02/11/2018 at 17:31

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This is the proper way to use commas:

,,doobydoo

winterlegacy, here 'till the end > Steve in Manhattan 02/11/2018 at 17:39

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Common sense often never appears in a legal brief, believe me.

Fixed something.

Steve in Manhattan > Ash78, voting early and often 02/11/2018 at 18:12

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Should have taken the time to get better photographs ... sort of copperish wheels.

Steve in Manhattan > winterlegacy, here 'till the end 02/11/2018 at 19:17

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And you left the period - color me impressed.